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Òåìà: Ãîñïîäà, íèèä õýëï. Íàïèñàë àíãëîÿçû÷íûé òåêñò.
Âðåìÿ: 14.01.2010 14:56 
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Ãîëîñ, àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ ãèòàðà

Íóæíî ïîìî÷ü èñïðàâèòü êîñÿêè...

The mechanical noise
Tear the inflammant brain
The electrical light
In the mirror of soul
Faith were trampled to the ground
With the ashes of past
And the sudden black rain
Turn my dreams to the mud

The Alien Planet
This is the Alien Planet

There's expression of fear
On the faces of streets
There's hysterical smiles
Of the wasted tranches
There's the print of the step
On the frozen substance
And the devilish god
In the sight of the cross

There's the house of cards
Among poems and notes
Which has shaltered my night
With an infinite dept
A lethargical dream
Under starless black skyes
And the indifference
Total Indifference
Dark voice of Angelique - êàíàë íà þ-òüþá http://www.youtube.com/user/MsOKeller Êîíöåðòû, âèäåî-êëèïû, àóäèî.
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Òåìà: Re: Ãîñïîäà, íèèä õýëï. Íàïèñàë àíãëîÿçû÷íûé òåêñò.
Âðåìÿ: 14.01.2010 15:39 
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Ãîëîñ, àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ ãèòàðà

UPD.

The mechanical noise
Tears the inflammant brain
The reflection light
In the mirror of soul
Faith was trampled to the ground
With the ashes of past
And the sudden black rain
Turns my dreams to the mud

The Alien Planet
This is the Alien Planet

There's expression of fear
On the faces of streets
There's hysterical smiles
Of the wasted tranches
There's the print of the step
On the frozen substance
And the devilish god
In the sight of the cross

There's the house of cards
Among poems and notes
Which has shaltered my night
With an infinite debt
A lethargical dream
Under starless black skies
And the indifference
Total Indifference
Dark voice of Angelique - êàíàë íà þ-òüþá http://www.youtube.com/user/MsOKeller Êîíöåðòû, âèäåî-êëèïû, àóäèî.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ãîñïîäà, íèèä õýëï. Íàïèñàë àíãëîÿçû÷íûé òåêñò.
Âðåìÿ: 14.01.2010 16:22 



äåïðåññíÿêú, îäíàêî :pr: â ìóçûêàëüíîì ïëàíå ÷òî-òî âðîäå äóìà ïîëó÷àåòñÿ?

The reflection light - ñâåò îòðàæåíèÿ, ÿ ïðàâèëüíî ïîíÿë?)

Turns my dreams INTO mud - òàê ïðàâèëüíî.

There's A house of cards - òóò íåîïð. àðòèêëü, ê òîìó æå "there's the" ñëîæíî ñïåòü ñàìî ïî ñåáå)

Which has shaltered my night - ìîæåò, shaTTered?


 îñòàëüíîì íîðìóëü, åñòü îòñóòñòâèå êîå-ãäå àðòèêëåé, íî ýòî íå ñòðàøíî, äàáû ðàçìåð íå ëîìàëñÿ. :)
Ìàøèíèñò ýëåêòðîäåïî «Ôèëè» Ìàêàðüåâ Â.Â. ïîëó÷èë ëåãêóþ òðàâìó ëåâîãî ãëàçà
â ðåçóëüòàòå óäàðà íèçêîëåòÿùåé äèêîé óòêè, êîòîðàÿ ïðîáèëà ëîáîâîå
ñòåêëî êàáèíû ãîëîâíîãî âàãîíà è óäàðèëàñü åìó â ëèöî.©
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Òåìà: Re: Ãîñïîäà, íèèä õýëï. Íàïèñàë àíãëîÿçû÷íûé òåêñò.
Âðåìÿ: 14.01.2010 16:55 
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Ãîëîñ, àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ ãèòàðà

Íó, êèáåð-ãîòèêà êàêáå. Ìðà÷íî, äà.

The reflection of light...î÷åïÿòêà..ñîððè

øýëòåð - óáåæèùå êàêáå. Ïðèþòèëî îíî.

çà çàìå÷àíèÿ ñïàñèáî. :super:
Dark voice of Angelique - êàíàë íà þ-òüþá http://www.youtube.com/user/MsOKeller Êîíöåðòû, âèäåî-êëèïû, àóäèî.
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Òåìà: Re: Ãîñïîäà, íèèä õýëï. Íàïèñàë àíãëîÿçû÷íûé òåêñò.
Âðåìÿ: 14.01.2010 18:21 



àãà. òîãäà shEltered :idea2:

íå çà øòà :hat:
Ìàøèíèñò ýëåêòðîäåïî «Ôèëè» Ìàêàðüåâ Â.Â. ïîëó÷èë ëåãêóþ òðàâìó ëåâîãî ãëàçà
â ðåçóëüòàòå óäàðà íèçêîëåòÿùåé äèêîé óòêè, êîòîðàÿ ïðîáèëà ëîáîâîå
ñòåêëî êàáèíû ãîëîâíîãî âàãîíà è óäàðèëàñü åìó â ëèöî.©
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ãîñïîäà, íèèä õýëï. Íàïèñàë àíãëîÿçû÷íûé òåêñò.
Âðåìÿ: 14.01.2010 20:40 
Galaxy far, far away
FORCE

And the devilish god
In the sight of the cross

À âîò áåç ýòîãî ìåñòå÷êà íèêàê íèççÿ?
I`ll be back
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ãîñïîäà, íèèä õýëï. Íàïèñàë àíãëîÿçû÷íûé òåêñò.
Âðåìÿ: 15.01.2010 10:03 
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Ãîëîñ, àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ ãèòàðà

÷òî â ýòîì ìåñòå÷êå êàæåòñÿ òåáå íåõîðîøèì?
Dark voice of Angelique - êàíàë íà þ-òüþá http://www.youtube.com/user/MsOKeller Êîíöåðòû, âèäåî-êëèïû, àóäèî.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ãîñïîäà, íèèä õýëï. Íàïèñàë àíãëîÿçû÷íûé òåêñò.
Âðåìÿ: 15.01.2010 19:05 
Galaxy far, far away
FORCE

>÷òî â ýòîì ìåñòå÷êå êàæåòñÿ òåáå íåõîðîøèì?

Ìíå âîîáùå ïîäîáíûå êîíñòðóêöèè íå íðàâÿòñÿ.
I`ll be back
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Òåìà: Re: Ãîñïîäà, íèèä õýëï. Íàïèñàë àíãëîÿçû÷íûé òåêñò.
Âðåìÿ: 15.01.2010 21:26 
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ïðèïîëÿðíàÿ ïÿòèíîãàÿ ãèåíà

êàì òóãåçà âðàéä íàé åâðè ìè...
Ëåòî ñòåêëîì òðåñíåò
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Ñêîëüêî íè ïåòü ïåñåí -
Âñå òèøèíîé êîí÷àòñÿ...
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Òåìà: Re: Ãîñïîäà, íèèä õýëï. Íàïèñàë àíãëîÿçû÷íûé òåêñò.
Âðåìÿ: 15.01.2010 22:07 



There's hysterical smiles
There are - äîëæíî áûòü, íî
Ànd hysterical smiles ñ ëåãêîñòüþ ðåøàþò ïðîáëåìó

There's the print of the step
Èñõîäÿ èç èçâåñòíîé ìíå ëîãèêè àíãëèéñêîãî ÿçûêà, ñëåäóåò èñïðàâèòü íà
There's a print of a step
ß ïîíèìàþ, ÷òî òû ýòî ñäåëàë ñïåöèàëüíî, íî ýòî êîñÿê

Òî æå ñàìîå ñ
And the sudden black rain
Ñëåäóåò
And à sudden black rain

Òî æå ñàìîå ñ
And the devilish god
Ñëåäóåò
And à devilish god

 ðàçúÿñíåíèÿ, ïî÷åìó, âäàâàòüñÿ íå ñòàíó, íî ìîæåøü ïîâåðèòü ìíå íà ñëîâî...
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Òåìà: Re: Ãîñïîäà, íèèä õýëï. Íàïèñàë àíãëîÿçû÷íûé òåêñò.
Âðåìÿ: 18.01.2010 11:51 
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Ãîëîñ, àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ ãèòàðà

Ñïàñèáî çà êîíñòðóêèâ, äðóçüÿ.
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