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Àâòîð
Òåìà: Ïåñíÿ íà àíãë. Ïîìîãèòå Î_î
Âðåìÿ: 07.02.2010 10:48 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

There is only cry of silent,
Only bright light of the darkness.
It remind that days were stupid,
It remind that days were lied,

In the moment we're alive,
In the moment we were tidy,
In the moment we were rosy,
In the moment we were die,

When we scrunched the hearts of darlings
And when throw it on the ground,
When we spited, trembled down –
But picked up the hearts again…

But there is a date on stone,
And the stone is filled by tears,
And someone wept out his eyes
When the stone was through by wreaths

Somewhen we were them,
Somewhen they were us,
Somewhen we were them,
Somewhen they were us…

Ïîìîãèòå ïëèç :mol: , ÷åò ÿ òóò çàïóòàëñÿ, ïåðåâîäèë íå ÿ, íî âîáùåì òî ïåñíÿ ìîÿ, ðèòì õðîìàåò, ïîäñêàæèòå êàê áû òóò òàê èñïðàâèòü, ÷òî áû ïî ðèòìè÷íåå áûëî, ñïàñèáî çà âíèìàíèå.
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíÿ íà àíãë. Ïîìîãèòå Î_î
Âðåìÿ: 07.02.2010 11:48 
Òðåòèé Ðèì
áàñ, ãèòàðà, õàììîíä

Somewhen = sometime (s - äîáàâèòü ïî âêóñó)
It reminds (somebody of something) = reminds me (êàê âàðèàíò)
The stone was through... - íåïîíÿòíî ÷òî áûëî ïî-ðóññêè è âûïî¸ò ëè âàø âîêàëèñò wreath? (áóëûæíèê ìíîãî èñïûòàë ÷åðåç âåíåö òåðíîâûé!)


Êðîìå îðôîãðàôèè íè÷åãî áû íå èñïðàâëÿë â ïåñíå, ãäå âî âòîðîé ñòðî÷êå "ÿðêèé ñâåò òüìû". Ðàçáåðèñü ñ only - îíî the only èëè it's only?
çëîáíàÿ ãàäèíà
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïåñíÿ íà àíãë. Ïîìîãèòå Î_î
Âðåìÿ: 07.02.2010 17:27 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

tekuillahumppa , ñïàñèá òåáå:) :respect:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!