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Òåìà: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 15:26 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãîëîñ  
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Âñåì ïðèâåò, ÿ íîâåíüêèé! Ó÷óñü ïèñàòü - ïèøó ñâîþ ïåðâóþ ïåñíþ. Ïîêðèòèêóéòå, ïîæàëóéñòà! When you don't have a pain in your soul, You can see stars are so bright. It seems she has no chance to go - She will be your's this perfect night. Suddenly she turns you away, She has gone, and there's no back way. It's so heavy. Heavy, heavy so! Wish you don't have a pain in your soul. |
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 15:39 |
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cringecore revival 
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>ÿ íîâåíüêèé! ÷îòà, çäà¸ööî ìíó, âð¸øø òû  *** áèòëàìå ïîïàõèâàåä |
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 15:53 |
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ
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>>ÿ íîâåíüêèé! >÷îòà, çäà¸ööî ìíó, âð¸øø òû äàäà äâå áåëûå çâåçäû, à ïîä íîâåíüêîãî êîñèò... êåì òû áûë â ïðîøëîé æèçíè? è çà ÷òî òåáÿ îáèäåëè, ÷òî òû ïîìåíÿë íèê? *** íó è äëÿ ïîðÿäêà: Åñëè ó âàñ íåò áîëè â äóøå, Âû ìîæåòå óâèäåòü çâåçäû òàê ÿðêî. Êàæåòñÿ, îíà íå èìååò íèêàêèõ øàíñîâ ïîéòè - Îíà áóäåò âàøà â ýòîò ïðåêðàñíûé âå÷åð. Âäðóã îíà ïîâîðà÷èâàåòñÿ òåáÿ, Îíà óøëà, è íåò ïóòè íàçàä. Ýòî î÷åíü òÿæåëî. Òÿæåëûå, òÿæåëûå òàê! Æåëàþ âàì íå áîëåòü â âàøåé äóøå. |
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http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 16:13 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãîëîñ
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Íîâåíüêèé â ïëàíå òåêñòîâ | |
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 16:37 |
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cringecore revival
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ýò ïàíÿòíî. ïî÷åìó íå èäèø èëè ñàíñêðèò? ïî÷åìó ôàêåí èíãëèø, äà åñ÷î òàã áîíàëüíî? | |
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 17:01 |
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Elektrik , ôèãàñå íîâåíüêèé... 
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 17:16 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãîëîñ
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×òî ñêàæåòå ïî òåêñòó? Àíãëèéñêèé ïîòîìó, ÷òî åùå äî ìåëîäèè â ãîëîâó ïðèøëà âîò ýòà ôðàçà, ÿ åå îùóòèë. | |
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 19:24 |
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Ãóì, íå èíà÷å êàê "ïðîìòîì" ïåðåâåë?
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Î÷åíü çäîðîâî, âñ¸-òàêè, æèòü! (ñ)
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 20:19 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãîëîñ
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Ïåðåâåäó à-ëÿ ïðîìïò ñõîäó Êîãäà ñåðäöå áîëü òåáå íå ðâåò,  íåáå çâåçäû ñâåòÿò î÷åíü ÿðêî, È îíà, ïîõîæå, íå óéäåò - Ñ íåé ñåãîäíÿ íî÷üþ áóäåò æàðêî. Íàâñåãäà îíà óõîäèò âäðóã, Âñå, óøëà, òåïåðü âñåãî ëèøü "äðóã". È ñòðàäàíüåì ïîëíèòñÿ äóøà - Ïåéòå ïèâî íå ñïåøà! |
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 20:19 |
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>heavy so! >Ãóì, íå èíà÷å êàê "ïðîìòîì" ïåðåâåë? ýòî íîâûé ìåì! |
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â îäèí ïðåêðàñíûé äåíü ìíîæåñòâî ïîëüçîâàòåëåé âçÿëî è ðàçáàíèëîñü
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 20:23 |
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>Ïåéòå ïèâî íå ñïåøà! Ýëèê, âîò ýòà ñòðî÷êà èç ðèòìà âûáèâàåòñÿ, à òàê òðóÚ! |
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Î÷åíü çäîðîâî, âñ¸-òàêè, æèòü! (ñ)
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 23:02 |
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Ìîñêâà Ãîëîñ
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Ìóçûêà ê òåêñòó |
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Òåìà: Re: When you don't have a pain in your soul
Âðåìÿ: 02.06.2010 23:51 |
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Ìîñêâà Ñèëà ìûñëè 
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Êàêîé-òî íåìíîãî ñòðàííûé òåêñò. "She will be your's this perfect night." Òóò èìåííî "your's" èëè âñå-òàêè "yours"? È ìíå êàæåòñÿ, ÷òî pain äîëæíî áûòü ñ "the"... |
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My prophet is a fool with his one, one, one; are not they the Ox, and none by the Book? ("The Book of the Law", A.Crowley)
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