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Ôîðóì òåêñòîâèêîâ

Çàäàòü íîâóþ òåìó
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Òåìà: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 09.11.2010 12:07 
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 ñâÿçè ñ òåì, ÷òî íàøà âîêàëèñòêà òåêñòû íå ïèøåò, èùåì õîðîøåãî ðóññêîÿçû÷íîãî òåêñòîâèêà. Äåíåã ïîêà íå ïðåäëàãàåì, õîòÿ îáñóæäàåìî, íî ãîòîâû âçÿòü â äîëþ ñ êîíöåðòîâ. Íàïðàâëåíèå - ñìåñü ýëåêòðîíèêè ñ ðîêîì è ôàíêîì.

Ïîñëóøàòü:

http://rutube.ru/tracks/3756110.html?v=56f8161ddb49feed9f4d4a801bd591f1

http://rutube.ru/tracks/3756125.html?v=fe6dcdce9d2f30693436f073c06eeaaa

Ïèøèòå â ëè÷êó, ïî÷òó.
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 00:51 
Ìîñêâà
âîêàë

 ñâÿçè ñ òåì, ÷òî íàøà âîêàëèñòêà íå çàíèìàåòñÿ ñî ìíîé ñåêñîì, èùó áàáó, ïðîñòóþ ñèñÿñòóþ áàáó.
Ïî÷åìó ýòî âîêàëèñòû äîëæíû ïèñàòü òåêñòû?
Ïî÷åìó íå áàðàáàíùèêè? Âîîáùå, ñâÿçè íå âèæó.
Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ.
Ñêàçàòü íå÷åãî, ÿ óìåþ òîëüêî ïåòü...
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 01:10 
Ìîñêâà


ïîñëóøàë.Ñêàæèòå, à çà÷åì Âàì âîîáùå òåêñòîâèê?Ðàñöâåòèòå ýòî ïðîñòî õîðîøèì ñèëüíûì âîêàëîì áåç ñëîâ è âñ¸ ïîëó÷èòñÿ.
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"È âîçäåíóò ëþäè ðóêè ê íåáó è âîçîïÿò:
-«Ñïàñè íàñ!».
À ÿ ïðîøåï÷ó â îòâåò:.-Íåò."
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 10:51 
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>Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ.
>

Îñîáåííî Øèíåä Î'Êîííîð, Áåò Ãèááîíñ è Ïàòòè Ñìèò. :)
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 12:13 



>>Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ.
>>
>
>Îñîáåííî Øèíåä Î'Êîííîð, Áåò Ãèááîíñ è Ïàòòè Ñìèò.

À ó íèõ ñèëüíûå òåêñòû? Ìîæíî ïåðåâîä ãëÿíóòü?)
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 12:15 
somewhere among nowhere


>À ó íèõ ñèëüíûå òåêñòû? Ìîæíî ïåðåâîä ãëÿíóòü?)
èíòåðåñóþò ñèëüíûå òåêñòû èëè ñèëüíûå ïåðåâîäû?)
Äîáðî äîëæíî áûòü ñ êóëàêàìè
Äîáðî ñóðîâûì áûòü äîëæíî,
×òîáû ëåòåëà øåðñòü êëîêàìè
Ñî âñåõ, êòî ëåçåò íà äîáðî…
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 12:36 



>>À ó íèõ ñèëüíûå òåêñòû? Ìîæíî ïåðåâîä ãëÿíóòü?)
>èíòåðåñóþò ñèëüíûå òåêñòû èëè ñèëüíûå ïåðåâîäû?)

ß íå íàñòîëüêî âëàäåþ àíãëèöêèì, ÷òî îöåíèòü êà÷åñòâî îðèãèíàëà. À ïî ïåðåâîäó, õîòÿ á òåìó ôêóðþ. Òîêà ñäà¸òñÿ ìíå è òàì òèïà êðîôüëþáîôü...
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 12:46 
somewhere among nowhere


Òðó ìåòàëüíûé òåêñò áàñèñòà:

When I was small
You took me by the hand
Father you should know
I finally understand

You taught me wrong from right
And how to live
You gave the greatest gift
That one could give

You never let me down
You made me strong
When I made mistakes
When I was wrong

Some days we'd laugh
And some days we'd fight
Somehow you knew one day
I'd say you were right

You're with me
In every word I say
In every hour
Of every single day
In all I do
I'm just a part of you

You lived your life for us
That was your plan
Those hands that never take
They worked the land
Hands that never take
Can only give
And because of you
I know how to live

You're with me
In every word I say
In every hour
Of every single day
In all I do
I'm just a part of you

Father just one thing
You always knew
Every word you said to me was true
Äîáðî äîëæíî áûòü ñ êóëàêàìè
Äîáðî ñóðîâûì áûòü äîëæíî,
×òîáû ëåòåëà øåðñòü êëîêàìè
Ñî âñåõ, êòî ëåçåò íà äîáðî…
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 12:59 



Ïîëîâèíó ïåðåâ¸ë - ïàòåòè÷åñêàÿ êóéíÿ. Î òîì êàêîé ó Ëà çäîðîâñêèé ïàïêà, êîòîðûé íàó÷èë åãî íå óíûâàòü è áûòü ñèëüíûì...
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 13:29 
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>À ó íèõ ñèëüíûå òåêñòû?

Ñèëüíûå, íî ïåðåâîäîâ ÿ íå âèäåë. Ñàì íå ïåðåâîæó.
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 13:32 
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http://www.amalgama-lab.com/songs/p/patti_smith/

http://www.amalgama-lab.com/songs/p/portishead/
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 13:35 



>>À ó íèõ ñèëüíûå òåêñòû?
>
>Ñèëüíûå, íî ïåðåâîäîâ ÿ íå âèäåë. Ñàì íå ïåðåâîæó.

À â ÷¸ì èõ ñèëà, áðàò?) (ñ)
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 13:55 
Ìîñêâà
âîêàë

Ìîæåò ýòî èñêëþ÷åíèå?
Âîïðîñ "ïî÷åìó âîêàëèñò äîëæåí"?
Ó Áóëàòà Îêóäæàâû õîðîøèå ñòèõè, íî êàê Âîêàëèñò îí íå î÷åíü.
Ó Ïàâàðîòòè îòëè÷íûé ãîëîñ, íî íå óâåðåí â õîðîøåñòè ñòèõîâ.
Ïðîñòî ãîëîñ è óìåíèå ïèñàòü ñòèõè ýòî íó êàê òî õîòü âñå è â ãîëîâå ãäå-òî, íî âñå òàêè ðàçíûå âåùè.
Ìåíÿ òîæå óïðåêàþò ÷òî ÿ íå ïèøó ñòèõè, íî ÿ íå ïîíèìàþ, ïî÷åìó æåëàíèå è óìåíèå ïåòü îáÿçûâàåò òåáÿ ïèñàòü ñòèõè.
Ýòî æ ãëóïîñòü - ïðîñòî ãëóïîñòü.
Âñå ðàâíî ÷òî åñëè òû áàáà - òî íàäî ðîæàòü, åñëè ìóæèê, òî çàáèâàòü ãâîçäè è ïèëèòü.
×òî çà íåâåñòü îòêóäà âçÿòûå øàáëîíû?
Ñêàçàòü íå÷åãî, ÿ óìåþ òîëüêî ïåòü...
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 14:09 
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Chernov , ÿ ñþäà ïðèøåë íå ñîôèñòèêîé çàíèìàòüñÿ, à òåêñòîâèêà èñêàòü. :)
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 14:10 



>>Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ.
>>
>
>Îñîáåííî Øèíåä Î'Êîííîð, Áåò Ãèááîíñ è Ïàòòè Ñìèò.

Íó, åñòü åùå Øàèíñêèé. Îí êàê çàïîåò - äåòè ñåäåþò...
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 14:10 
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À âîîáùå ñóòü â òîì, ÷òî ñîáñòâåííûå ñòèõè âîêàëèñò ëó÷øå ÷óâñòâóåò è ñîîòâåòñâåííî ëó÷øå ïîåò.
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 14:17 

6 ñòðóí

Ëåòíèé êàííèáàëèçì (ïåðåâîä Psychea) i

I was down in Georgia
Nothing was as real
As the street beneath my feet
Descending into air

The cauldron was a-bubbling
The flesh was lean
And the women moved forward
Like piranhas in a stream
They spread themselves before me
An offering so sweet
And they beckoned and they beckoned
Come on darling eat

Eat the summer cannibals
Eat eat eat
You eat the summer cannibals
Eat eat eat

They circled around me
Natives in a ring
And I saw their souls a-withering
Like snakes in chains
And they wrapped themselves around me
Ummm what a treat
And they rattled their tales hissin'
Come on let's eat

Eat the summer cannibals
Eat eat eat
You eat the summer cannibals
Eat eat eat

I felt a rising in my throat
The girls a-saying grace
And the air the viscous air
Pressed against my face
And it all got too damn much for me
Just got too damn rough
And I pushed away my plate
And said boys i've had enough
And I laid upon the table
Another piece of meat
And I opened up my veins to them
And said come on eat

Eat the summer cannibals
Eat eat eat
You eat the summer cannibals
Eat eat eat
You eat the summer cannibals
Eat eat eat
You eat the summer cannibals
Eat eat eat

Cause I was down in Georgia
Nothing was as real
As the street beneath my feet
Descending into hell

So eat eat eat
You eat eat eat
You eat eat eat
Eat eat eat
ß áûëà â Äæîðäæèè...
Íè÷òî íå áûëî ðåàëüíî,
Íè÷òî íå áûëî òàê ðåàëüíî, êàê
Ðàññòèëàâøàÿñÿ ïåðåäî ìíîé äîðîãà, ÷òî âåëà â ïóñòîòó...

Âàðåâî â êîòëå ïóçûðèëîñü,
Ïëîòü áûëà ñêóäíà.
Æåíùèíû -
Ïèðàíüè â ðåêå, -
Ïîäîøëè, è ðàññûïàëèñü ïåðåäî ìíîé, è
(Ñòîëü çàìàí÷èâîå ïðåäëîæåíèå!)
...È - çâàëè ìåíÿ, çâàëè ìåíÿ:
- Ïîäîéäè, ìèëàÿ, ïîïðîáóé!

- Åøü! - ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû, -
Åøü, åøü, åøü,
Åøü, - ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû! -
Åøü, åøü, åøü...

Äèêàðè ñòîëïèëèñü ïåðåäî ìíîé,
Îêðóæèëè ìåíÿ,
È ÿ âèäåëà èõ äóøè,
Óâÿäàþùèå, ñëîâíî çìåè â öåïÿõ.
È... - îíè îêðóæèëè ìåíÿ...
- Ì-ì, ÷òî çà óäîâîëüñòâèå! -
Øèïÿ, ïîâòîðÿëè îíè,
- Äàâàé, ïîïðîáóé, âêóñè!

- Åøü! - ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû, -
Åøü, åøü, åøü,
Åøü, - ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû! -
Åøü, åøü, åøü...

 ãîðëå ó ìåíÿ âñòàë êîì...
Äåâóøêè ñ èõ ñëàäêèìè ðå÷àìè,
Âîçäóõ, âÿçêèé âîçäóõ, ñãóñòèâøèéñÿ âîçäóõ, -
Ïåðåä ìîèì ëèöîì...
Ìíå ïîêàçàëîñü, ÷òî ýòî óæå ñëèøêîì,
Ñëèøêîì ãðóáî äëÿ ìåíÿ.
È ÿ âñòàëà, è îòîäâèíóëà òàðåëêó,
È ïðîìîëâèëà: "Ðåáÿòà, ñ ìåíÿ äîñòàòî÷íî".
È áðîñèëà íà ñòîë
Åù¸ îäèí êóñîê ìÿñà,
ß âñêðûëà âåíû äëÿ íèõ,
È ïðèãëàñèëà: "Äàâàéòå, ïåéòå, åøüòå!"

Åøüòå, ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû,
Åøüòå, åøüòå, åøüòå,
Åøüòå, âû, ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû,
Åøüòå, åøüòå, åøüòå,
Åøüòå, âû, ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû,
Åøüòå, åøüòå, åøüòå,
Åøüòå, âû, ëåòíèå êàííèáàëû,
Åøüòå, åøüòå, åøüòå...

...Ïîòîìó ÷òî ÿ áûëà â Äæîðäæèè,
È íè÷òî íå áûëî ðåàëüíî,
Íè÷òî íå áûëî òàê ðåàëüíî, êàê
Ðàññòèëàâøàÿñÿ ïåðåäî ìíîé äîðîãà, ÷òî âåëà ïðÿìèêîì â àä...

- Òàê åøüòå! Åøüòå! Åøüòå!
Âû, - åøüòå! Åøüòå! Åøüòå!
Âû, - åøüòå! Åøüòå! Åøüòå!
Åøüòå! Åøüòå! Åøüòå!

 ñìûñëå, íàäî òàêóþ õðåíü?
Ïîñëå òîãî, êàê àìóð óøåë ïîïèñàòü çà óãîë, íåîáõîäèìîñòü â èãðå ó êëîóíà èñ÷åçëà..ñóõóì
áàáàëàéêà
:dyavol:
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 14:21 
âàëèäàòîð
òðåçâîñòè

>À âîîáùå ñóòü â òîì, ÷òî ñîáñòâåííûå ñòèõè âîêàëèñò ëó÷øå ÷óâñòâóåò è ñîîòâåòñâåííî ëó÷øå ïîåò.
Åññíî :agree:
È ïîýòîìó "ÊÑÏ" (íåâàæíî, êàê îáîçâàòü àâòîðñêóþ ïåñíþ) - ñîâñåì íå òàêîé îòñòîé, êàê ìíîãèå çäåñü ïî÷åìó-òî óï¸ðòî ñ÷èòàþò.  âîêàëüíîì ïëàíå òîæå, ìåæäó ïðî÷èì, à óæ ïî óðîâíþ òåêñòîâ è ïîäàâíî.
Íå âñå, êîíå÷íî, íî ìíîãèå :)
âñ¸ ãàâíî áåñïëàòíî
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 14:24 



>À âîîáùå ñóòü â òîì, ÷òî ñîáñòâåííûå ñòèõè âîêàëèñò ëó÷øå ÷óâñòâóåò è ñîîòâåòñâåííî ëó÷øå ïîåò.

Íåïðàâèëüíàÿ ñóòü. Ý.Õèëü íàïðèìåð ñïåë ïåñíþ:
Ëà-ëà, ëà-ëà-ëà, ëà-ëà-ëà, ëà-ëà-ëà...Î-î, î-î-î,î-î-î, î-î-î....
èòàê âñÿ ïåñíÿ, íå ïèææó)
ß òàê äóìàþ ñàì ñî÷èíèë, ñýêîíîìèë...À ÷¸? ïðåòåíçèé íåò, áåç êîñÿêîâ. Êîãäà îí ïåë, ìíå êàçàëîñü ÷òî ó íåãî íåïðåðûâíûé îðãàçì îò ñâîåãî âîêàëà.
ßéöà â íåãî íå êèäàëè - çàñëóæåííûé àðòèñò âñ¸ òàêè.
Íî âñ¸ æ îùóùåíèå ó ìåíÿ îñòàëîñü, ÷òî ìåíÿ êàê ñëóøàòåëÿ î÷åíü êðóïíî íàéýáàëè)
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Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 14:48 

ëåíèíãðàäñêàÿ ãèòàðà.

Ïðîñòî òàêàÿ âåùü,êîòîðóþ ñïåë Õèëü íàçûâàåòñÿ âîêàëèç...íîðìàëüíûé æàíð,áåç âñÿêèõ îáìàíîâ, à äæàçîâûå ïåâöû ðàçâå íå ïîþò òàêèå âåùè ? Äëÿ Õèëÿ ýòî êàæåòñÿ ñàì Òàðèâåðäèåâ íàïèñàë ?...
Ìàôèÿ íå ðàáîòàåò çà ÷àåâûå !...
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 15:09 
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>Â ñìûñëå, íàäî òàêóþ õðåíü?
>

Âïîëíå, òîëüêî âñå-òàêè ñ íîðìàëüíûì ðèòìîì è ðèôìîé, ïî-ðóññêè.
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 15:19 



 èòîãå äàíû ðóññêèé ÿçûê è íàïðàâëåíèå ìóçûêè.
À åùå êîíêðåòíåé ìîæíî?

+ õîðîøî áû áûëî ñêèíóòü ïàðó ÷óæèõ òåêñòîâ äëÿ ïðèìåðà, âåäü ïèñàòü ìîæíî î ÷åì óãîäíî è êàê óãîäíî
+ íà ðûáó ïèñàòü èëè íå ñòîëü âàæíî?
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Òåìà: Re: Èùåì òåêñòîâèêà
Âðåìÿ: 10.11.2010 15:23 
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Äæåéðàí.
http://www.realmusic.ru/bc
(Âñå ïåñíè, êðîìå "Èìÿ òâîå").

È âîò òå àíãëîãîâîðÿùèå æåíùèíû, êîòîðûõ ÿ ïðèâîäèë â ïðèìåð (ïîíÿòíî, ÷òî ÿçûê äðóãîé, íî ìåññåäæ ïðàâèëüíûé). :)

Ïîä ðûáîé ïîäðàçóìåâàåòñÿ ìèíóñîâêà? :) Òîãäà äà. Òî åñòü, âîêàëüíóþ ìåëîäèþ ïðèäóìûâàåò ñàìà âîêàëèñòêà, à ìåòð ñòèõîâ çàäàåò òåêñòîâèê, îðèåíòèðóÿñü íà ìóçûêàëüíóþ òåìó. :idea2:
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Èëè âîò åùå ïðèìåð:

Âûïàë ñíåã
×òî-òî ìåíÿåòñÿ
 âîçäóõå
 íàøåé êðîâè
Ëóíà
Âåðìóò
Äîðîãà ê ìåòðî
È ÷üè-òî ñëîâà... ÷üè?

Ñíåã âûáèâàåò
Ðèòì ïî ñòåêëó
Âåòåð èãðàåò
Íà òðóáàõ
Òû ñïèøü
Ëåãêî,
Òû ñïèøü äàëåêî
Çà ñîòíþ êâàðòàëîâ ê þãó.

Ïð:
Ïðîñíèñü, íà÷èíàåòñÿ òàíåö òåíåé
Íûðíè â ëàáèðèíòû òðåâîæíûõ îãíåé
Çàáóäü âñå ñîìíåíèÿ è äàé ðóêó ìíå...
Èäåì íà òàíåö òåíåé

À åñëè òû
Íå óñëûøèøü ìåíÿ
ß ïîéìó,
ß ëåãêî âñå ïðèìó
Ïóñòü òâîé ñèëóýò
Ðàñòâîðèòñÿ â íî÷è
Ëóíà íå äàñò óéòè
Íèêîìó

Ðàñòàåò ñíåã
×òî-òî îñòàíåòñÿ
 âîçäóõå
 íàøåé êðîâè
Âåøíèå
Âîäû
Çàìêíóòûé êðóã
È ÷üè-òî ñëåçû... ìîè?

Ïð.
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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>Ïðîñòî òàêàÿ âåùü,êîòîðóþ ñïåë Õèëü íàçûâàåòñÿ âîêàëèç...íîðìàëüíûé æàíð,áåç âñÿêèõ îáìàíîâ, à äæàçîâûå ïåâöû ðàçâå íå ïîþò òàêèå âåùè ? Äëÿ Õèëÿ ýòî êàæåòñÿ ñàì Òàðèâåðäèåâ íàïèñàë ?...

Âîêàëèç...òàêîå, èìõî, ïðèåìëåìî â îïåðàõ, â äæàçå.
Êîãäà ãîëîñ âûïîëíÿåò òîëüêî ôóíêöèþ èíñòðóìåíòà. Âîêàëèñò ïî ìàêñèìóìó äåìîíñòðèðóåò îñîáåííîñòè è âîçìîæíîñòè ñâîåãî ãîëîñà.
À Õèëü ýñòðàäíûé èñïîëíèòåëü ïîïóëÿðíîé ìóçûêè è ïðè òàêîì ''âîêàëèçå'' àáñîëþòíî íè÷åì íå áëåñíóë.
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Ìîñêâà
âîêàë

Äà, ÷òî-òî òàêîå åñòü.
À íå ïðîùå ëè ïîòðàòèòü âðåìÿ ñàìîìó - ïî÷èòàòü òóò êòî êàêèå ñòèõè ïèøåò è ñîòðóäíè÷àòü ñ êîíêðåòíûì ÷åëîâåêîì. À òî èäè òóäà, íå çíàþ êóäà...
Ñêàçàòü íå÷åãî, ÿ óìåþ òîëüêî ïåòü...
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>À íå ïðîùå ëè ïîòðàòèòü âðåìÿ ñàìîìó - ïî÷èòàòü òóò êòî êàêèå ñòèõè ïèøåò è ñîòðóäíè÷àòü ñ êîíêðåòíûì ÷åëîâåêîì.

Íåà, íå ïðîùå. Èáî ìíå âàæåí èíòåðåñ ÷åëîâåêà ê ñîòðóäíè÷åñòâó èìåííî ñ íàìè, à íå òîëüêî åãî ôèíàíñîâûé èíòåðåñ.
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Ìîñêâà


>Â ñìûñëå, íàäî òàêóþ õðåíü?
Íå, íó, òóò ïðîñòî íàëèöî òåïëîâîé óäàð.

>Èëè âîò åùå ïðèìåð:
>
>Âûïàë ñíåã
>×òî-òî ìåíÿåòñÿ
>Â âîçäóõå
>Â íàøåé êðîâè
>Ëóíà
>Âåðìóò
>Äîðîãà ê ìåòðî
>È ÷üè-òî ñëîâà... ÷üè?
Îïÿòü âîïðîñ-íó, çà÷åì íîðìàëüíóþ ìóçûêó âóàëèðîâàòü íàáîðîì ñëîâ?Âû ñàìè ìîæåòå îáúÿñíèòü, î ÷¸ì ýòî?Âàì òåêñòû íå íóæíû, èìõî.
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"È âîçäåíóò ëþäè ðóêè ê íåáó è âîçîïÿò:
-«Ñïàñè íàñ!».
À ÿ ïðîøåï÷ó â îòâåò:.-Íåò."
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Ï-ñê


Äóìàë, äóìàë, öåëàÿ ïîýìà ïîëó÷èëàñü. Ê Òàíöó òåíåé.
8-)

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[Ðÿäîì íåò òåáÿ] -> [â ôîíå ïåðåîäè÷åñêè ïðîïåâàòü]

 îìóòå íÎ÷è
Òåíè òàíöóþò
Ïåðåïëåòàÿñü â òóìàíå îñåííåì
Çîëîòîì ñåðûì
Îêðàøåíû ñáðóè
Öåïè èñêðÿòñÿ, áðÿêàþò çâåíüÿ

Ãîëîñîì õðèïëûì
Âîåò ðàçëóêà
Çîâ îò Ëóíû îòðàæàåòñÿ ýõîì
Òàíåö òåíåé
Çàêîí÷èòñÿ óòðîì
Ñòîíàìè ñíîâ, çàãàäî÷íûì ñìåõîì

Òàíåö òåíåé
Òàíåö òåíåé
Ýõî äâèæåíèé
Äðîæüþ ïûëàåò
Çâóêè çàòèõëè
Ñâåò íå ïðîáü¸òñÿ
 õðàìå íî÷íîì
Òåíè òàíöóþò

Ãäå æå òû ãäå
Òû íå ïðèõîäèøü
Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå

Òåíè òâîè
Òîëüêî ëèøü áðîäÿò
Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå

Ãäå æå òû, ãäå
Íî÷üþ òóìàííîé
Óâèæó â îêíå

Òàíåö òåíåé
 îáëàêå ðâàíîì
Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå

Òåíè òàíöóþò
Âîññòàëè èç ïðàõà
Õðàì ïîëóíî÷íûé òåíßì íå ïîìåõà
Ïåðåïëåòåíüå
Ðàçëóêè è ñòðàõà
Ñíîâà çàäàñò âîïðîñ áåç îòâåòà

Òåíè óøåäøèõ
Íàâåêè çàáûòû
 õîëîäå íÎ÷è íàïîìíÿò î ïðîøëîì
 òàíöå ñïëåëèñü
Íàì¸êè è ñóäüáû
Íî âîïëîòèòü ìå÷òó íåâîçìîæíî

Ïëàâíîñòü äâèæåíèé
Ñîí íàâåâàåò
Òàíåö òåíåé
Çàâëåêàåò â îáúÿòüÿ
Íåêîãäà äóìàòü
Êðîòêîñòü çàáûòà
Ñêðîìíîñòü óáèòà
 òàíöå ïîëíî÷íîì

Ãäå æå òû ãäå
Òû íå ïðèõîäèøü
Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå

Òåíè òâîè
Òîëüêî ëèøü áðîäÿò
Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå

Ãäå æå òû, ãäå
Íî÷üþ òóìàííîé
Óâèæó â îêíå

Òàíåö òåíåé
 îáëàêå ðâàíîì
Ãäå æå òû. Ãäå. Ãäå

(ñ) 11.11.2010 bav9
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Ìîñêâà
Ãèòàðà, êëàâèøè

Jack K. , äëÿ íåêîòîðûõ ýòî áóäåò ïîëíîé íåîæèäàííîñòüþ, îòáèâàþùåé îõîòó çàíèìàòüñÿ ìóçûêîé, íî ÿ âñ¸-òàêè ðèñêíó - ñêàæó òåáå âñþ ïðàâäó, êàê îíà åñòü.
Ìåëîäèþ ïðèäóìûâàåò êîìïîçèòîð. À âîêàëèñòêà äîëæíà ýòó ìåëîäèþ ñïåòü ñî ñëîâàìè, êîòîðûå ïðèäóìûâàåò ïîýò-ïåñåííèê, êîòîðîãî çäåñü áóäåì íàçûâàòü òåêñòîâèêîì. Ïîñëå ýòîãî äåëàåòñÿ àêêîìïàíåìåíò. Òû âûëîæèë àêêîìïàíåìåíò è õî÷åøü ïîä íåãî ñíà÷àëà ñòèõè, à ïîòîì îò âîêàëèñòêè (?!?) åù¸ è ìåëîäèþ. Ýòî òîæå ñàìîå, ÷òî ñíà÷àëà çàêóïèòü óãîùåíèå äëÿ ñâàäüáû, â ñîîòâåòñòâèè ñ íèì ñøèòü ñâàäåáíîå ïëàòüå, à ê íåìó ïîäáèðàòü íåâåñòó…
À ñòèëü àêêîìïàíåìåíòà ìíå íðàâèòñÿ.
Äîðîãîé Òîâàðèù

http://www.stihi.ru/author.html?rehjd
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òðåçâîñòè

Áàâ, ïîíðàâèëñÿ òåêñò!
Ïî÷åìó íå âûëîæèë îòäåëüíî?
È âîîáùå... òû ïî õîäó-òî... íó, â ìèðó, äóðàêà âàëÿåøü, ÷òî ëè? :1_6:
âñ¸ ãàâíî áåñïëàòíî
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Ï-ñê


>Áàâ, ïîíðàâèëñÿ òåêñò!
>Ïî÷åìó íå âûëîæèë îòäåëüíî?
>È âîîáùå... òû ïî õîäó-òî... íó, â ìèðó, äóðàêà âàëÿåøü, ÷òî ëè?

Ñïàñèáî. Ñåé÷àñ âûëîæó, äóìàä, Jack K. ïîñìîòðèò, à îí, ïîõîæå, ïðîïàë êóäà-òî 8-(

Äóðàêà ÿ íå âàëàþ. Ïðîñòî íàñòðîé ðàçíûé áûâàåò è ñîîòâåòñòâåííî è òåêñòû ðàçíÿòñÿ, ÷àñòî ñèëüíî.
8-)
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>Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ.
*ãðÿçíî âûðóãàëàñü*
ïðîñòèòå, íå ñäåðæàëàñü
íå... íó îò êàê âñåãäà, óìíûõ ìíîãî, òåêñòîâ íåò
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ÊÄÌ , êòî êàê õî÷åò, òàê è äðî-÷èò. :)
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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bav9 , õîðîøèé òåêñò. Ïðàâäà, "Òàíåö òåíåé" ó íàñ óæå óêîìïëåêòîâàí ñëîâàìè. ß òðýêè âûëîæèë ÷èñòî äëÿ îçíàêîìëåíèÿ.
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ


>Âîêàëèñòû ïèøóùèå ïåñíè ýòî ÊÑÏ
âàùå òî ïåñíè â îñíîâíîì áîëüøèíñòâå (åñëè áðàòü íå ïîïñó çàêóïî÷íóþ) è ïèøóò âîêàëèñòû (íó èëè ëèäåðû ãðóïï).

ó ìíîãèõ íåò æåëàíèÿ è èíîãäà âîçìîæíîñòè äåðæàòü ïðè ãðóïïå ñåáåíàóìåòåêñòîâèêàîòäåëüíîãî
http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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Ï-ñê


>bav9 , õîðîøèé òåêñò. Ïðàâäà, "Òàíåö òåíåé" ó íàñ óæå óêîìïëåêòîâàí ñëîâàìè. ß òðýêè âûëîæèë ÷èñòî äëÿ îçíàêîìëåíèÿ.

8-(
À ÿ òàê ñòàðàëñÿ.. òàê ñòàðàëñÿ... 8-( *õíûê,íîñîì øìûðã
Äóìàë, ñïîþò ìåíÿ.. â òåëåâèçîðå.. 8-(

8-)
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Äà, åùå ðàç ïîä÷åðêèâàþ: ìóçûêó âûëîæèë ÷èñòî äëÿ îçíàêîìëåíèÿ ñ íàøèì ñòèëåì , ðàáîòà áóäåò âåñòèñü ïî íîâîìó ìàòåðèàëó.
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
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Åæåëü ïîíðàâèëîñü è èíòåðåñíî, ìîæåøü íà ìûëî íàïèñàòü, â ïðîôèëå åñòü. 8-)
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bav9 , ÎÊ.
We're leaving Babylon, we're going to our Father's land.
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!