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Òåìà: St. James Infirmary (ïåðåâîä)
Âðåìÿ: 23.01.2019 14:20 |
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Ðàç â òàâåðíó "Ó ñòàðîãî Äæîíà", ×òî ïîä âå÷åð íàðîäîì ïîëíà, ß çàø¸ë, ïîïðîñèë áóðáîíà, È ñåë çà ñòîë ó îêíà. Âäðóã õîçÿèí êî ìíå îáåðíóëñÿ, Áàãðîâûé îò ïüÿíûõ ñë¸ç, Ïîäîø¸ë, ïðÿìî ê óõó ïðèãíóëñÿ, È òàêèå ñëîâà ïðîèçí¸ñ: Âèäåë ÿ, â Ñåíò-Äæåéìñ, â ëàçàðåòå Íà áåëîé ïðîñòûíå Òà, êîòîðîé íåò êðàøå íà ñâåòå, Ëåæàëà â ñìåðòíîì ñíå. Óïîêîé å¸ äóøó, î Áîæå, Íî äàæå â íåáåñíûõ êðàÿõ Íèêîãäà è íèêòî íå ñìîæåò Ëþáèòü å¸ òàê, êàê ÿ. Ñêîðî ÿ âñëåä îòïðàâëþñü çà íåþ,  êîñòþìå è øëÿïå ïîä ñòàòü, È â ðóêå çîëîòàÿ ãèíåÿ, ×òîá â ðàþ íàì íóæäû íå çíàòü. Ïóñòü îðêåñòð çàèãðàåò, ñâèíãóÿ, Ãðÿíåò ïåòàðä ñàëþò, Ïóñòü ìíå õîð ïðîïî¸ò: Àëëèëóéÿ, Êàê ê ìîãèëå ìåíÿ ïîâåçóò. Âîò òåïåðü òû óñëûøàë îá ýòîì - Òàê âûïåé ñî ìíîé ñêîðåé! Áëþç Ñåíò-Äæåéìññêîãî ëàçàðåòà -  ïàìÿòü ëþáâè ìîåé. I went down to Old Joe's Bar-room On the corner by the square Drinks were being served as usual And the same old crowd was there On my left was Old Joe MacKennedy His eyes were blood-shot red His elbow on the bar he turned to me And these are the words he said: I went down to St. James Infirmary I saw my baby there Stretched out on a long white table So sweet, so cold, so fair Let her go, let her go, God bless her Wherever she may be She can search this wide world over She'll never find another sweet man like me When I die bury me in my straight legged shoes Box back coat and a Stetson hat Put a twenty dollar gold piece on my watch chain So the boys will know I died standing pat An' give me six crap shooting pall bearers, Let a chorus girl sing me a song Put a red hot jazz band at the top of my head So we can raise Hallelujah as we go along Well now you've heard my sad story Boy hand me another shot of that booze And if any one should ask you I've got the St. James Infirmary Blues |
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Òåìà: Re: St. James Infirmary (ïåðåâîä)
Âðåìÿ: 23.01.2019 14:53 |
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>Ñêîðîÿâñëåä Ñêîðî âñëåä ÿ >Ãðÿíåò ïåòàðä ñàëþò Ãðÿíåò îãíåé ñàëþò >ÊàÊÊìîãèëå È ê ìîãèëå 
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Òåìà: Re: St. James Infirmary (ïåðåâîä)
Âðåìÿ: 23.01.2019 21:26 |
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Êîãäà ìîÿ äåâóøêà ïðåäëîæèëà çàìåíèòü êðàñíûé íà áàãðîâûé, ÿ ñîãëàñèëñÿ. À ñ ïîäîáíûì "ïðè÷¸ñûâàíèåì" íå ñîãëàñåí. Íå òà ïåñíÿ. Òåêñò, êàê è â îðèãèíàëå (ïî íàñòîÿíèþ êîëëåãè ñêîìïèëèðîâàë äâà âàðèàíòà òåêñòà) äîëæåí áûòü íåñêîëüêî êîðÿâ è óãëîâàò. Àôðîàìåðèêàíöû 100 ëåò íàçàä óíèâåðñèòåòîâ íå êîí÷àëè  Ðèòìèêà òîæå ñàîáîäíàÿ. Ãëàâíîå, ÷òî âñ¸ ïî¸òñÿ, ïðîâåðåíî íåñêîëüêî ðàç íà ïóáëèêå)))
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Òåìà: Re: St. James Infirmary (ïåðåâîä)
Âðåìÿ: 23.01.2019 21:40 |
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>Êîãäà ìîÿ äåâóøêà ïðåäëîæèëà çàìåíèòü êðàñíûé íà áàãðîâûé, ÿ ñîãëàñèëñÿ. Bobbassist , õîðîøî, êîãäà åñòü äåâóøêà) |
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Òåìà: Re: St. James Infirmary (ïåðåâîä)
Âðåìÿ: 23.01.2019 21:41 |
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Êàê ê ìîãèëå ìåíÿ ïîâåçóò "Êàê" â ñìûñëå "êîãäà" òóò íàñòîêà óäåøåâëÿåò òåêñò, øòî ñëûøèööà íå àôðîàìåðèêàíñêèé,, à ìàëîðîññèéñêèé àêöåíò) Õîðîøóþ çàìåíó òåáå ïðåäëîæèëè!) |
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ß ìîãó ïîíÿòü ëþäåé, ñòó÷àùèõ çà ïàéêó èëè ïî ïðèíóæäåíèþ, íî èäåéíûé ñòóêà÷ - ýòî îòäåëüíàÿ ïåñíÿ. (c) ëåíòÿé-ãóðó
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Òåìà: Re: St. James Infirmary (ïåðåâîä)
Âðåìÿ: 23.01.2019 21:51 |
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ñóõóì áàáàëàéêà
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Ïðî÷èòàë ðóññêèé ïîäñòðî÷íèê Çâó÷èò èíòåðåñíåå, ÷åì òåêñò. È òðîãàòåëüíåå) Âîò òàì äåéñòâèòåëüíî ñëûøèòñÿ áëþç |
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ß ìîãó ïîíÿòü ëþäåé, ñòó÷àùèõ çà ïàéêó èëè ïî ïðèíóæäåíèþ, íî èäåéíûé ñòóêà÷ - ýòî îòäåëüíàÿ ïåñíÿ. (c) ëåíòÿé-ãóðó
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Òåìà: Re: St. James Infirmary (ïåðåâîä)
Âðåìÿ: 23.01.2019 22:23 |
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Ïàðà çàìå÷àíèé.  îðèãèíàëå íå "õîçÿèí" æàëóåòñÿ, à Ñòàðèíà Äæî Ìàê-Êåííåäè. È ïî ôîðìå.  îðèãèíàëå ðèôìîâêà òîëüêî ÷åòíûõ ñòðîê. Ýòî ïîïðîùå. | |
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Òåìà: Re: St. James Infirmary (ïåðåâîä)
Âðåìÿ: 23.01.2019 23:07 |
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Ðàç êàáàê "Ó ñòàðèíû Äæî" (Äæîíîì åãî ñäåëàë ðàäè ðèôìîâêè íå÷¸òíûõ ñòðîê - ïî-ðóññêè òàê ëó÷øå ïî¸òñÿ) - çíà÷èò, îí è åñòü õîçÿèí)) ëîãèêà)) à ïåðåâåñòè áëþç êàê áëþç íà ðóññêèé íåðåàëüíî. Çäåñü ïåñíÿ âñ¸-òàêè íå áëþç â ÷èñòîì âèäå, ýòî àôðîàìåðèêàíñêàÿ ïåðåïåâêà ñðàçó íåñêîëüêèõ "áåëûõ" íàðîäíûõ ïåñåí. Åñëè ïðîâîäèòü ïàðàëëåëü ñ îòå÷åñòâåííûì òâîð÷åñòâîì òîãî æå âðåìåíè - íàïðàøèâàåòñÿ àíàëîãèÿ ñ æåñòîêèì ðîìàíñîì. Íåìíîãî ïîçâîëèë ñåáå òàêóþ ñòèëèçàöèþ, è êîãäà âæèâóþ ïîþ - ïðÿìî ãîâîðþ îá ýòîì))) | |
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Òåìà: Re: St. James Infirmary (ïåðåâîä)
Âðåìÿ: 23.01.2019 23:35 |
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Íàñ÷åò õîçÿèíà ñîãëàøóñü. Íàñ÷åò ðèôìîâêè âîïðîñ ñïîðíûé.  ðóññêèõ ÷àñòóøêàõ, ê ïðèìåðó, ðèôìîâêà 2-4. Âî ìíîãèõ íàðîäíûõ è àâòîðñêèõ ïåñíÿõ òîæå. Âîò, ñêàæåì, "Ñòåïü äà ñòåïü êðóãîì..." èëè "Âàðÿã" ("Íàâåðõ âû, òîâàðèùè, âñå ïî ìåñòàì...". À ðàçâå "Ñìóãëÿíêà-ìîëäàâàíêà" Ôàòüÿíîâà ïëîõî ïîåòñÿ?.. ×òî êàñàåòñÿ "ïåðåïåâêè", òî ýòî î÷åíü ïîõîæå íà ñòèõîòâîðåíèå Ðîáåðòà Ñåðâèñà "Ñëåïîé è ìåðòâàÿ" (The Blind and the Dead by Robert W. Service). Âîò åãî íà÷àëî: She lay like a saint on her copper couch; Like an angel asleep she lay, In the stare of the ghoulish folks that slouch Past the Dead and sneak away. Òîëüêî òàì äåëî ïðîèñõîäèò â Ïàðèæå. Óñïåõîâ! |
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Òåìà: Re: St. James Infirmary (ïåðåâîä)
Âðåìÿ: 24.01.2019 00:10 |
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 âèêèïåäèè íà àíãëèéñêîì èíòåðåñíûå âåùè íàïèñàíû î ïåðâîèñòî÷íèêàõ. À íàñ÷¸ò ðèôìîâêè - äåëî âêóñà. ß äàëåêî íå âîêàëèñò, è êîãäà ñàì ïîä ãèòàðó ïîþ, ðèôìîâêà ìíå ïîìîãàåò))) | |
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Òåìà: Re: St. James Infirmary (ïåðåâîä)
Âðåìÿ: 24.01.2019 04:34 |
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Ïîäñòðî÷íèê - ×å÷àêî ñòàéë.... | |
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