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Òåìà: Dreaming of Candles | Ïåïåë Ðàçâååò Âåòåð
Âðåìÿ: 21.06.2026 20:22 



Ñíà÷àëà àíãëèéñêèé êàâåð íà ðóññêèé òåêñò ïîòîìó ÷òî ìóçëî ïîëó÷èëîñü, ìíå î÷åíü êàê-òî íðàâèòñÿ, íå ïîéìó íà ÷òî ïîõîæå, ìóæñêîé âîêàë íèêîãäà ìíå íå íðàâèëñÿ êàê äåëàëà SUNO à âîò ýòîò êàê ðàç "òî". Íó ìîæåò ÿ òóïîé ïðîñòî. À ìîæåò áåç "ìîæåò".  îáùåì õî÷ó ÷òîá òàêîå êòî-íèáóäü ïîñëóøàë. Õîòÿ á îäèí êòî-íèáóäü.

Dreaming of Candles



asleep and dreaming of candles
with flame that would burn forever
but that what you wait for comes never
and this rain won't stop

the one who flies,
the one who strains,
soaring up like a bird - he sinks, descends
into the depths
falls down back
just like a stone

what has burned is ashes
what has burned the wind scatters
the one who's fallen won't rise
what blooms fades away

but if the sun begins to set
then watch it go, ask it what's there
what waits past the line
i'll listen too
i'll sit next to you

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Ïåïåë Ðàçâååò Âåòåð



ñïà́ëè-ìå÷òàëè ñâå÷è
÷òî áóäóò ãîðåòü âå÷íî
íî òî ÷åãî æäåøü íå íàñòàíåò
è äîæäü íå ïåðåñòàíåò

òîò êòî ëåòèò-ñòðåìèòñÿ
â íåáî âçìûâàåò ïòèöåé
âíèç óïàäåò êàê êàìåíü
â ãëóáèíû óéäåò - êàíåò

òî ÷òî ñãîðåëî - ïåïåë
ïåïåë ðàçâååò âåòåð
òîò êòî óïàë - íå âñòàíåò
à òî ÷òî âçîéäåò - óâÿíåò

à åñëè ñàäèòñÿ ñîëíöå
òî òû ïðîâîäè åãî âçãëÿäîì
ñïðîñè åãî, ÷òî òàì, çà ãîðèçîíòîì?
ÿ òîæå ïîñëóøàþ, ñÿäó ñ òîáîþ ðÿäîì
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Òåìà: Re: Dreaming of Candles | Ïåïåë Ðàçâååò Âåòåð
Âðåìÿ: 22.06.2026 08:31 
Åêàòåðèíáóðã
Ãèòàðà

Î÷åíü ïîíðàâèëñÿ ðóññêèé âàðèàíò. Ìîæåò, ïîòîìó ÷òî ðóññêóþ ïîýòèêó âèæó, à àíãëèéñêóþ - íå äîãîíÿþ.
À, ìîæåò, ïîòîìó ÷òî ìåëîäèÿ è ãîëîñ çàìå÷àòåëüíî ëåãëè íà òåêñò.
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