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.....ïèøó äëÿ ñåáÿ, âðåìÿ íå òåðÿþ.. ìîãó íàïèñàòü òåêñò âàì.. òåìû ðàçëè÷íûå..è íà ýòîò ðàç âûñòðåëèëî â òàêèå æàíðû: ..ýëåêòðîíèê-ðîê, èíäóñòðèàë-ðîê, àëüòåðíàòèâíûé ðîê, ñèíòè-ïîï... ïðèìåðíî òàêàÿ âîëíà. Òåêñò îòëè÷íûé...è âðÿä ëè áóäåò ðàáîòàòü íà ðîññèéñêóþ òîëïó ... òàêîå ëó÷øå ïåðåâåñòè íà àíãëèéñêèé..(ìîé àíãëèéñêèé íåãîòîâ.ìàëî çíàíèÿ). ýòî ìîå ïåðâîíà÷àëüíîå çàìå÷àíèå ..÷òîáû ìû íå òðàòèëè âðåìÿ.. è....ïåñíÿ(òåêñò) ëåãêî ðåäàêòèðóåòñÿ...ãîòîâ ìàëåíüêèé âûðåçàííûé ôðàãìåíò .. ÿ â ñîñòîÿíèè åãî ïåðåäåëàòü â áîëåå ïîëíóþ âåðñèþ.. _________ïðèìåð èç ÷åðíîâèêà_________________ ß î÷íóëñÿ ñðåäè ðàñêîëîòûõ äâåðåé ÿ âõîæó â íîâóþ äâåðü "Îòêðûâàé ìíå ñêîðåé!" Ïóëüñ íà íóëå - Äâèæåíèÿ íåò Íåò ñèãàðåò, Òÿæêèå äóøè Ìèð ïîòðÿñåí, íèêîìó ÿ íå íóæåí Îòâåðãíóò ñåìüåé.. òåìíîòà äóøè Ëåãêèé çâîí òâåðäûõ êîíå÷íîñòåé ïåðâûé çàõîä â ìèð áåñêîíå÷íîñòè _________ïðèìåð ïåðåâîäà ñ àíãëèéñêîãî(ïåðåâîä÷èê+ðåä.)________ ß ïðîñíóëñÿ ñðåäè ðàçáèòûõ äâåðåé ß âõîæó â íîâóþ äâåðü "Îòêðîéòå åå áûñòðî!" Èìïóëüñ íàõîäèòñÿ â íóëåâîì ïîëîæåíèè-íèêàêîãî äâèæåíèÿ Íåò ñèãàðåò, ñåðüåçíàÿ äóøà.. Ìèð øîêèðîâàí, ìíå íèêòî íå íóæåí... Îòâåðãíóò ñåìüåé - òåìíûìè äóøàìè. çâóê óäàðà òâåðäûõ êîíå÷íîñòåé... è ÿ âåðíóëñÿ â ìèð áåñêîíå÷íîñòè ____àíãë. âåðñèÿ ïðèìåðíî______ I woke among the broken doors I enter the new door "Open it quickly!" The pulse is in zero position-no movement No cigarettes, serious soul.. The world is shocked, I do not need anyone... Rejected by family-dark souls. the thud of the solid limbs... and I returned to the world of infinity çàìåòêà: ìîå ìåñòîïîëîæåíèå íåäåéñòâèòåëüíî |
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