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Òåìà: Ñâî¸ îïÿòü çàõîòåëîñü ñïåòü/âûëîæèòü. Òðåê True Love, unplugged, live, ìîé ïðîäàêøí :)
Âðåìÿ: 18.02.2019 16:34 |
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Ìîñêâà âîêàë (öåíòðàëüíûé áàñ) 
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Êîììåíòèðóåì, ïîæàëóéñòà 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñâî¸ îïÿòü çàõîòåëîñü ñïåòü/âûëîæèòü. Òðåê True Love, unplugged, live, ìîé ïðîäàêøí :)
Âðåìÿ: 18.02.2019 16:56 |
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Ìîñêâà âîêàë (öåíòðàëüíûé áàñ)
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Òåêñò, ÷òîáû ïîíÿòíåå áûëî î ÷¸ì I dreamed to find my Neverland beyond those tears I cried I waited dawn to bring me hope with new day’s sun to shine I had no darkness in my soul, though, it could had been there I did believe that someday someone said she really cared I wish for never being so lonely than those days My heart was broken, I was living in a grave But I’ve found pieces of my broken lonely heart My Devil’s gone, and I have found my love I dreamed to find my Neverland beyond those tears I cried I waited dawn to bring me hope with new day’s sun to shine I had no darkness in my soul, though, it could had been there I did believe, and that day has come, and now I’m singing here And, finally, Gods are good and kind and fine to me My dream comes true, all fears are gone, and now I see All those mistakes I’ve ever made don’t matter now My heart’s wide opened welcomes True Love |
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Ìîé Ñàìûé Íîâûé Õèò - https://youtu.be/r45NiCFx2nk
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Òåìà: Re: Ñâî¸ îïÿòü çàõîòåëîñü ñïåòü/âûëîæèòü. Òðåê True Love, unplugged, live, ìîé ïðîäàêøí :)
Âðåìÿ: 18.02.2019 17:04 |
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À êðóòî. Çààðàíæèðîâàòü áû ýòî äåëî êàê ñëåäóåò, è ïîëó÷èëñÿ áû î÷åíü äàæå ïðèêîëüíûé òðåê! Ïî çàìå÷àíèÿì(ëè÷íî íà ìîé ñëóõ) - ðåçêîâàòàÿ äèêöèÿ, î÷åíü çàìåòåí "ñëàâÿíñêèé" àíãëèöêèé ìåñòàìè. È ìåñòàìè ãíóñàâèøü äîâîëüíî çàìåòíî, òîæå ñòîèò íàä ýòèì ïîðàáîòàòü. Íî íà ôîíå ïðîäåëàííîé ðàáîòû, ýòî âñå ïîïðàâèìûå ìåëî÷è, à òàê îäíîçíà÷íî çà÷åò! |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñâî¸ îïÿòü çàõîòåëîñü ñïåòü/âûëîæèòü. Òðåê True Love, unplugged, live, ìîé ïðîäàêøí :)
Âðåìÿ: 18.02.2019 17:07 |
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Ìîñêâà âîêàë (öåíòðàëüíûé áàñ)
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>À êðóòî. Çààðàíæèðîâàòü áû ýòî äåëî êàê ñëåäóåò, è ïîëó÷èëñÿ áû î÷åíü äàæå ïðèêîëüíûé òðåê! >Ïî çàìå÷àíèÿì(ëè÷íî íà ìîé ñëóõ) - ðåçêîâàòàÿ äèêöèÿ, î÷åíü çàìåòåí "ñëàâÿíñêèé" àíãëèöêèé ìåñòàìè. È ìåñòàìè ãíóñàâèøü äîâîëüíî çàìåòíî, òîæå ñòîèò íàä ýòèì ïîðàáîòàòü. Íî íà ôîíå ïðîäåëàííîé ðàáîòû, ýòî âñå ïîïðàâèìûå ìåëî÷è, à òàê îäíîçíà÷íî çà÷åò! Ñïàñèáî! Ïðîñòî åñëè ñþäà âûêëàäûâàòü, ÷òî-òî èäåàëüíîå - íèêòî íè÷åãî íå ñîèçâîëèò ñêàçàòü! 
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Ìîé Ñàìûé Íîâûé Õèò - https://youtu.be/r45NiCFx2nk
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Òåìà: Re: Ñâî¸ îïÿòü çàõîòåëîñü ñïåòü/âûëîæèòü. Òðåê True Love, unplugged, live, ìîé ïðîäàêøí :)
Âðåìÿ: 18.02.2019 17:10 |
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Ðèãà Ãîëîñ ëèðÒåíîð / ãèòàðà / - Ken Lawrence Explorer Replica 
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>>À êðóòî. Çààðàíæèðîâàòü áû ýòî äåëî êàê ñëåäóåò, è ïîëó÷èëñÿ áû î÷åíü äàæå ïðèêîëüíûé òðåê! >>Ïî çàìå÷àíèÿì(ëè÷íî íà ìîé ñëóõ) - ðåçêîâàòàÿ äèêöèÿ, î÷åíü çàìåòåí "ñëàâÿíñêèé" àíãëèöêèé ìåñòàìè. È ìåñòàìè ãíóñàâèøü äîâîëüíî çàìåòíî, òîæå ñòîèò íàä ýòèì ïîðàáîòàòü. Íî íà ôîíå ïðîäåëàííîé ðàáîòû, ýòî âñå ïîïðàâèìûå ìåëî÷è, à òàê îäíîçíà÷íî çà÷åò! >Ñïàñèáî! >Ïðîñòî åñëè ñþäà âûêëàäûâàòü, ÷òî-òî èäåàëüíîå - íèêòî íè÷åãî íå ñîèçâîëèò ñêàçàòü! åùå êàê ñîèçâîëÿò 
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Ken Lawrence Explorer Replica / Esp ltd
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Òåìà: Re: Ñâî¸ îïÿòü çàõîòåëîñü ñïåòü/âûëîæèòü. Òðåê True Love, unplugged, live, ìîé ïðîäàêøí :)
Âðåìÿ: 18.02.2019 17:11 |
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Ëÿñíàÿ ôåÿ Äî÷ü ëåäÿíîé çàðè 
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ðûáà çà÷¸òíàÿ øëèôîâàòü ñ JustStarted ñîãëàñíà...àãà
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óæàñà íåò íè â êðîâè æàðåíîãî ìÿñà, íè â ...
óæàñ, ýòî êîãäà æàðÿò ìÿñî, â êîòîðîì êðîâè íåò óæå äàâíî. èëè ñòèõè ìåðòâûå. âîò ýòî óæàñ.(ñ) VNE |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñâî¸ îïÿòü çàõîòåëîñü ñïåòü/âûëîæèòü. Òðåê True Love, unplugged, live, ìîé ïðîäàêøí :)
Âðåìÿ: 18.02.2019 17:16 |
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Ìîñêâà âîêàë (öåíòðàëüíûé áàñ)
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>ðûáà çà÷¸òíàÿ >øëèôîâàòü >ñ JustStarted ñîãëàñíà...àãà Íàäî æå Ìîÿ ëåïòà â èíîñòðàííóþ ïîìîéêó ïîëó÷àåò çà÷¸òû Ó ìåíÿ ïðîñòî àíãëèéñêèé âòîðîé ðîäíîé, êàê ó òàòàð áàøêèðñêèé, Äæà ñâèäåòåëü!
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Òåìà: Re: Ñâî¸ îïÿòü çàõîòåëîñü ñïåòü/âûëîæèòü. Òðåê True Love, unplugged, live, ìîé ïðîäàêøí :)
Âðåìÿ: 18.02.2019 17:54 |
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der Bär brummt 
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[1] I dreamed to find my Neverland beyond those tears I cried I waited dawn to bring me hope with new day’s sun to shine I had no darkness in my soul, though, it could had been there I did believe that someday someone said she really cared [line1] íåëüçÿ "to dream to do sth", íóæíî "dream about/of doING sth" [line2] íåëüçÿ "wait dawn" íî íóæíî 'wait FOR THE dawn" [line3] Çàïÿòàÿ ïðèäà¸ò íåâåðíûé ñìûñë - íóæíî "soul, though it could..." [line4] âðåìåíà èç ïðîøåäøåãî íåâåðíû - íóæíî "I did believe some day someone would say he/she would really care" -----äðóãèå êóïëåòû íå ðàçáèðàþ--- Îáùèé ñìûñë òåêñòà ïðîèçâîëüíàÿ ñâÿçêà êàêèõ-òî ïîëóöèòàò èç ðàçíûõ ìåñò, êîòîðûå çàäåðæàëà âàøà ïàìÿòü. Òàê ÷òî íîñèòåëè ÿçûêà âàìè îñòàëèñü íåäîâîëüíû. 
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Áåëûé Ìåäâåäü - ïåñåö íà ñòåðîèäàõ |
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Âðåìÿ: 18.02.2019 17:58 |
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Ìîñêâà âîêàë (öåíòðàëüíûé áàñ)
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>[1] >I dreamed to find my Neverland beyond those tears I cried >I waited dawn to bring me hope with new day’s sun to shine >I had no darkness in my soul, though, it could had been there >I did believe that someday someone said she really cared >[line1] íåëüçÿ "to dream to do sth", íóæíî "dream about/of doING sth" >[line2] íåëüçÿ "wait dawn" íî íóæíî 'wait FOR THE dawn" >[line3] Çàïÿòàÿ ïðèäà¸ò íåâåðíûé ñìûñë - íóæíî "soul, though it could..." >[line4] âðåìåíà èç ïðîøåäøåãî íåâåðíû - íóæíî "I did believe some day >someone would say he/she would really care" >-----äðóãèå êóïëåòû íå ðàçáèðàþ--- >Îáùèé ñìûñë òåêñòà ïðàêòè÷åñêè îòñóòñòâóåò, ýòî íàáîð øòàìïîâ, >ïðîèçâîëüíàÿ ñâÿçêà êàêèõ-òî ïîëóöèòàò èç ðàçíûõ ìåñò, êîòîðûå >çàäåðæàëà âàøà ïàìÿòü. >Òàê ÷òî íîñèòåëè ÿçûêà âàìè îñòàëèñü íåäîâîëüíû. Äæà òåáÿ òîæå ëþáèò!
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Òåìà: Re: Ñâî¸ îïÿòü çàõîòåëîñü ñïåòü/âûëîæèòü. Òðåê True Love, unplugged, live, ìîé ïðîäàêøí :)
Âðåìÿ: 18.02.2019 18:03 |
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Ïîâåñòâîâàíèå ïîñëåäîâàòåëüíîå, îäíàêî, ìåäâåäó, êîíå÷íî, âèäíåå
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Òåìà: Re: Ñâî¸ îïÿòü çàõîòåëîñü ñïåòü/âûëîæèòü. Òðåê True Love, unplugged, live, ìîé ïðîäàêøí :)
Âðåìÿ: 18.02.2019 18:13 |
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Ìîñêâà âîêàë (öåíòðàëüíûé áàñ)
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Åù¸ íàø¸ë êîñÿê. Dreamt âìåñòî dreamed. Íàäîáíî ïåðåäåëàòü, ñïàñèáî çà ðàçáîð. | |
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